Hi Krispen,
Nice video, very promising first try. If you like continuing making vids, I have to say again do yourself a favor and spent money on a good tripod and accept the extra dragging ;-)
Be cautious with panning. I have a pro tripod from my work in my car most of the time, I hardly ever use it. Even with that one it is hard to make a smooth pan.
I'm not a fan of transitions between shots. I only use a fade-in at the first and a fade-out at the last shot. Music as a background remains a problem, what music do we use and where do you get it for free? If some one has a good suggestion, pls tell us.
Looking forward to your next video.
I will now carry on with my video from last weekend, it's uploading now, fingers crossed, it's over 2 gig ;-)
Cheers Fred